Sin Kids by Daylen Newton
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Sin Kids by Daylen Newton
I hit the character limit for the post sadly so I decided to just make a ready to read version on docs. Of course I'll move it to something better eventually and it still needs some editing also. But here it is. Enjoy! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IkejtIVp6FL0aVrWdn7D1n5mcfnvXY8pxRjpEID-Fls/edit?usp=sharing
Last edited by Dim_Jimbo on Wed Jun 28, 2017 5:33 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : updating the text)
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Re: Sin Kids by Daylen Newton
I've finally posted the current versions of sins kids. Enjoy what I've written and feedback on how to improve the story such and dialogue, grammar, how to progress/transition from one part of the story to another such as the gang going from lunch to The Blue Monday. I'll be updating it once I feel like the current part I'm going to add to this is satisfying to me. Enjoy and stay tuned!
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